Let Me Take You

Let me take you into the rains which stream into my heart
Show you the lightning flashing in my veins
You can listen to the thunder as we stand a world apart
Then I will bring you inside me
To remain

Inside of me you will find the silence of hills and valleys
Places you can wander in peaceful bliss
But you will still see that lightning flashing wildly
Hear crashing thunder in the magic
Of my kiss

You can tell me about the rains that stream into your heart
Show me the rocky mountains in your eyes
Together we will stand watching rain clouds part
As the lightening in our veins
Paints our skies

Take me inside of you so I can climb your mountains
The very thought brings me peaceful bliss
Together we will seek to fill love’s own fountain
With the rain in our hearts
Streaming kiss

Reviews

[Pebbles]

When i tell to you my truths and still you accept me, that will be when I will take you within the confines of my heart to dwell for evermore and if forevermore turns into only a meer moment in time then at least I will know for sure that the love I gave was real, for without the pretence and masks of life I can surely shine within my own skin. .......................this is beautiful Neva , you inspire the poetess within x

[Antonio Valentino]

What a wonderful stillness to this, a tender offering of togetherness.

Gorgeous.

[Bonnie]

Great imagery! I can see, hear, feel as I read your poem. An interesting combination of power, force and peaceful bliss. Lovely

[Jibey]

Just beautiful...

[Forest Green]

Very nice...lightly romantic, heartfelt and brimming with optimism. You bring together the love of nature, the brightness of life and gentleness of physical appeal.

Well done...!

[Art]

Wow...this is really a very unique and depth filled poem...so much to feel and touch upon...those comparisons and vies make one stop and thoroughly process each and every thought...nice poem...

[Jvl narasimharao]

It like a young couple drenched in the love of rain
yoursJVL

[LA Lorena]

Your poetry always carries a beautiful imagery and eloquence, and this latest piece is no exception. Spoken like someone who has lived it and been there! Bravo!

[Lily Mae]

To be with each other in hills and valleys of love, passion, life..sounds absolutely beautiful to me. The balance of love. I really loved "With the rain in our hearts, streaming kiss". Perfect:) x

[fargone]

a beautiful write, neva. ur standard of poetry remains amazingly high :)