Unknown Sand Runs Ashamed in Paradise

Do you remember when our days passed into invisible nights
Where time made no sense as it vanished to shade
Some say the moon tells us where our sun hides in heaven
‘Cause when darkness gathers over fields you see
Glistening dewdrops at play

We hold our breath because a moment remains at midnight
Charming us while pretending to be in a gentle trance
Until what we thought could not possibly exist anymore
Climbs upon our knee to brush our cheek
In a dream filled glance

Stretched out we feel time looks at us as if he were saying
Unknown sand now runs ashamed in our paradise
In those seconds we hide away from the sweetest voice
That can be heard from our whispering moon
Passed into invisible nights

Reviews

[Derek S.Keck]

I always feel like our writing compements one anothers so well. I do remember "when our days passed into invisible nights". Thats whats so beautiful about your poetry, it's spoken from your soul, yet you take it to a place where everyone can relate. Everything you do is amazing!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Love your words, you write the most beautiful poetry.

[Moflo]

Love that the title is the most profound and catching line of the poem, and such a great line it is that really ties it all together. I like your images here, this a deep profound work.

[Lily Mae]

Oh to pass into the invisible nights under the whispering moon.. You are the Goddess of words... I will never stop loving your poetry.. You make my weary heart hopeful..xx

[Cerebriation]

Such wonder and mystery. This one really strikes me. I really love it! Makes me feel like I'm flying.... :)

[Right Wing Constervativ..]

wish i could write that well