When I Kiss the Face of Love

When I Kiss the Face of Love

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Occupying a thousand sunbeams with a hint of ivory lace............

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A sense of softness speaks in moments

when I kiss the face of love
Occupying a thousand sunbeams
with a hint of ivory lace

I get lost in the corners of my thoughts
as they rush deep inside
Reflecting warmth to capture clouds
so they can no longer
Come near me

There is a place in my heart
that greets the breath
of the face of love
A million times I would inhale
the scent with no complaint

I delight in the mysteries and secrets
this breath so often tells
And etches within my soul
lovely memories that no words
Could ever take

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Yes I am all mushy and romantic again today, just can't help myself........

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It's the Spring and the sap is rising... and the hormones sloshing... I love the 'hint of ivory lace'... which sent me thinking of lingerie... and scents which I would not complain about...

You write with such soothing and caressing beauty... Do you do massage?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Lots of amazing descriptions. Great write as usual.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

world needs alittle bit more love, good job


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Mushy and romantic", but well-written. Love your wordplay and imagery. This is why I try to stay away from romance; I just can't write it like this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Usually I don't go for mushy poetry, though I do consider myself a romantic at times, I really enjoyed this. Wonderful language and imagery. ~ BlackCl0ud

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely loved the last stanza...Lovely memories that no words could ever make.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwwww!!!!! sooooooo *sniff* romantic!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's the Spring and the sap is rising... and the hormones sloshing... I love the 'hint of ivory lace'... which sent me thinking of lingerie... and scents which I would not complain about...

You write with such soothing and caressing beauty... Do you do massage?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well, the good news is that mushy and romantic suits you well! Another lovely gem you have here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Everyone needs to be touched at least once a day or they go mad.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem expresses what a simple touch can to do a person, and that is making us breathless :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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