Tiny Moments

For Tate Morgan..........one that rhymes...........

Through rain that sounds on hills of tiny moments
Somewhere beneath a faithful plea
We act out in the deepest shades of gray
As intellects passing in cascades
Of sailing ecstasy

Poets reflecting secret words which breathe in joy
Hiding our thoughts in perfect prose
Until the heavens embrace our smiling sun
And we speak in tongues
That we chose

With full cups of dreams from our imaginations
Step by step we advance on shores
Until all your thoughts rhyme in emotions
And all those tiny moments
Become yours

Author's Note

Some love the rhymes, some don't...........:)

Reviews

[Helen]

Sometimes the words are a perfect ryhme and sometimes the words are just a barely labouring stuttering prose.... But each word is perfect that comes before or after.... it depends how the author chose...

This flows like a silken waterfall over rocks smoothed by time...

I love it! You rock! Even while you roll ;-)

[Aidz]

The writers ode.... brill write once again

[Sri Gawn Tu Fahr]

full cups of dreams `how luscious,yummy and delightful (((❤)))

[raindroplove]

very well done

[Forest Green]

This is very well done...rhyming just enough to keep it from prose. Optimistic and nicely dreamy.

Very good work...!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well the type that loves it, and my dear and sweet friend, I love it, well penned and a great read!

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you nothing like vindication and beauty all in one sitting lol
I am humbled by the attention

[Lily Mae]

I'm a lover of all of your work:) "Hiding our thoughts in perfect prose"... this says so much to me... thank you Neva.. x

[WynterPhoenix]

"With full cups of dreams from our imaginations." Breathtaking!

[Dream Weaver]

You know I love the rhymes, but I'm enjoying this lovely
piece for what it is....Endearing!

[Robin]

you wrapped this one up lovely , there is treasure in all of those moments .