A Glorious Mist Will Come

A Glorious Mist Will Come

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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For my friend J.M.F. (Bear)

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You ask about this barren desert that you find me walking in

Where the strings of my heart
Are drawn so tight
That I cannot breathe or seem
To part

You wonder if there is more to life than these cracks I see
Or the dust flowing through my hands
And what can be done
With this need I find I have
To run

Yes, sometimes I wonder if there are hills that glow with light
Where I know that I can still stand and sing
About my endless hope
And the joy I know that life
Can bring

Do not worry yourself about the place you find me in
Though I know it sings aloud to you
Soon a glorious mist will come
To drench this void and chase away
My blues

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Thank you Bear

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I enjoyed this write found it inspiring.
So well written as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good. i love the dessert description.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. Your work is awe inspiring,

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your work captivated me at "Barren desert" I felt dry and parched at the thoughts and then you refreshed me at "Drench this void" Wonderful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Do not worry yourself about the place you find me in
Though I know it sings aloud to you" I love this piece.. it really speaks to your hearts and to the hearts of so many..xx Beautiful write for a beautiful friendship:) xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed reading this one. "To drench this void and chase away My blues".--- Best line

Posted 13 Years Ago


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