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Compartment 114
Dreams of Unknown Melodies

Dreams of Unknown Melodies

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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My eyes are turned to touch upon their ancient realms of hope............

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Dreams of unknown melodies become my companions

When the moon sits upon her throne, my love
Far away, more gravitating
Are the quivering stars in the heavens
Up above

My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace
Blazing there, high above the tallest trees
In lines, my soul can name
Running ceaseless and as fair as fair
Can be

Within all the perfect strength I find from these two
There lies this land, where breezes blow
To chase away the fog
That softly creeps across my heart
With woe

The cares of life are swept away in unknown melodies
Into that place known as wilderness, of sound
My eyes are turned to touch
Upon their ancient realms of hope
Once again……….
My world is spinning round

© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Oh my goodness, I glanced at the stats on this piece and see a number which surprises. I guess by the number, 1046 views, I am not your only big fan. I am as amazed at the number as I am at how you are able to capture light and mist and the realms of hope. With the words, "My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace Blazing there, high above the tallest trees", I find myself looking up to warm my face seeking peace in the tallest trees.
Beautiful write.


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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A beautiful poem, well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My life floats within the sun in a blissful perfect peace
Blazing there, high above the tallest trees
In lines, my soul can name

Beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful write, as always. Your poetry is always so mystifying.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Beautiful write, done a great job as always..
You're always a favorite writer of me....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a beautiful write...to chase away the fog that creeps across the heart...amazing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was lovely Neva your work never ceases to amaze me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Only you can dream and write a poem like this.Poetry is your instinct.We, the ordinary souls like me write poems after a long labour and trouble.You are a muse and I am your devotee at your feet THOUGH MUCH OLDER
yours JVL

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

loved it. Everything I wanted to say has been said....excellent work as always

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My goodness, many people looked at this- 23 , now 24 reviewed.
I know you are the best at romantic poetry that takes the reader and pulls them gently into the poem .
Also your poems are usually so gentle and soft like a lover;s morning kiss- I love your writing.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Truly lovely; every word perfectly placed. It is is those mysterious melodies that inspire us to write, I believe... that aspiration to define the unknown that exists within...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 15, 2011
Last Updated on February 26, 2012
Tags: hope, moon, sun, land, trees, melodies

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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