Your Hands

Your Hands

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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If not for the murmurs of sweet memories evoked when my eyes are caressing your hands

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Sighs of great bliss emanate from all of my senses

At the very sight of your hands
Sweet murmurs of memories evoked in a passion
Mesmerizing in haunting command

I am quieted of motion, stopped in existent time
Thrilled to my core of being
With memories of spaces and faraway places
Your hands take my spirit a fleeing

Strength emits from the coursing of lifeblood
Pulsing within your clasp
Holding my heart in suspended anticipation
Inviting the fire of your grasp

My attention is gravitated by the fire in your eyes
A flame, perhaps I could withstand
If not for the murmurs of sweet memories evoked
When my eyes are caressing your hands

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
The poem that goes along with the cover of my book, Hand Of the Muse.......this one is very special to me.

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My attention is gravitated by the fire in your eyes
A flame, perhaps I could withstand
If not for the murmurs of sweet memories evoked
When my eyes are caressing your hands


i love this lines they are so good and describes passion and love it just so sweet !!:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Beautifully written. Your language is amazing. So descriptive, sensual, smooth, with a flow as fluid, and as natural as water.

I feel like I can learn a million different things from this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is amazing just what hands can do. The imagery is delicately sensual and the thoughts are beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can only imagine why... This one touched me brought back bittersweet memories. Thank you for sharing this with us. xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written. Very intense feelings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem. How calm and deep this love is. How wonderfully you allow us to feel that along with you. As always, you speak to my heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem. Very deep and transcending. I particularly like the way you have 'confused' senses to evoke emotion. Very inspiring (to make me wanna write)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A touching and piercing piece, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My attention is gravitated by the fire in your eyes
A flame, perhaps I could withstand
If not for the murmurs of sweet memories evoked
When my eyes are caressing your hands


i love this lines they are so good and describes passion and love it just so sweet !!:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hands can reveal many things, go ask any fortune teller.
In this it reveals the writers passion and ponder all in
one. inspirational no doubt, always a pleasure Neva....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Always written with passion and as always a comfort to me. Love your work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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