Your Hands

Your Hands

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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If not for the murmurs of sweet memories evoked when my eyes are caressing your hands

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Sighs of great bliss emanate from all of my senses

At the very sight of your hands
Sweet murmurs of memories evoked in a passion
Mesmerizing in haunting command

I am quieted of motion, stopped in existent time
Thrilled to my core of being
With memories of spaces and faraway places
Your hands take my spirit a fleeing

Strength emits from the coursing of lifeblood
Pulsing within your clasp
Holding my heart in suspended anticipation
Inviting the fire of your grasp

My attention is gravitated by the fire in your eyes
A flame, perhaps I could withstand
If not for the murmurs of sweet memories evoked
When my eyes are caressing your hands

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
The poem that goes along with the cover of my book, Hand Of the Muse.......this one is very special to me.

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My attention is gravitated by the fire in your eyes
A flame, perhaps I could withstand
If not for the murmurs of sweet memories evoked
When my eyes are caressing your hands


i love this lines they are so good and describes passion and love it just so sweet !!:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very beautifully put as with all your writings. Mesmerizing in haunting command...I love this line. Excellent poem!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, the hands are sensitive to touch.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully expressed and deeply moving. i can see why this is a favorite. well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your eyes, returning the favors suggested so sinuously throughout this poem. Even more soulful than most of yours, Neva...and that's going some. I'd say I felt this, but that would be a lie. I wish I felt this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such passion and love evoked from caressing his hand visually, memories embrace the sight and strong emotions are released as sweet nostalgia that sings to ones heart. Beautiful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tremendously beautiful :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And I can see why, its beautiful! Hands can tell us so much! The sheer energy/aura of them.....this is wonderful, as always xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

there is something speical about hands..you made it spritual..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful piece. I like it much. Evokes a sentiment that the woman longs for the hands of her lover.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful, the line, "I am quieted of motion, stopped in existent time
Thrilled to my core of being", somehow expresses the inexpressable. I am so excited for you and your new book, "Hand Of The Muse." What an accomplishement!


Posted 12 Years Ago


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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