Fill My Soul Delighted

Better than purposely it seems attracting
All that filled my soul delighted
Before you danced in tracks of beauty
Our hearts were not meant to be divided

In sleep itself we are great trees of splendor
Silver hands that wake to see
Flowers bring what is born unto flame
Rest on laurels of you and me

If this comes from butterflies of time
To softly rest upon our lips
Should we not place your hand in mine
And round this cup both sip

I find that I am empty but I must endure
Pass this test of time
Until my streams are filled once again
Your heart is tied to mine

Dearest desire, light of my darkness
Fill my soul delighted
Come and sip this cup with me…’tis full
When we are not divided

Reviews

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Neva, This was just exquisite, but then again everything you write is. But one speaks volumes upon volumes. " Dearest desire, light of my darkness fill my soul delighted. Come and sip this cup with me...tis full, When we are not divided" These words can speak to everyone in a different way depending on how they want to interpet it. Love it, it is a favorite. xo

[Judy Ponceby]

What a lovely sad write. Beautiful imagery. And a lovely invitation at the end. :)

[MuSe Ampoule]

Brilliantly intimate. This was beautiful!

[Hayley]

"Our hearts were not meant to be divided"- I like that, especially at the end when you wrapped up the whole poem with it again.
"Silver hands that wake to see
Flowers bring what is born unto flame
Rest on laurels of you and me" - I really like your use of flowers and language that appeals to the senses. It makes this poem more sweet and fits the mood of the poem more. You expressed everything so well in this, and I can see your work taking a turn for more love-themed :) Always a pleasure to read you!

[Michael X]

Fre flowing and beautiful, at the same time, the rhymes are delicicate,
this is soft and intoxicating, you have a marvelous way with words :)

[kdpgrahi]

Glorifying love. Well done Neva

[Ladysue]

astounding stunning!!!!

Flowers bring what is born unto flame
Rest on laurels of you and me

love the ending too...just gorgeous writing...

[brenda]

amzng and beautiful and so peaceful determined writng i loved it !:)

[E.V. Black]

Once again, extremely lovely, Neva. Need I say more?

[silentpoet]

sounds like love to me, beautiful..

[Veronica Chandler]

This is a lovely piece it oozes with desire and just enough sadness to make it expressive of something beautiful. I love the images you painted in my minds eye.