Fill My Soul Delighted

Better than purposely it seems attracting
All that filled my soul delighted
Before you danced in tracks of beauty
Our hearts were not meant to be divided

In sleep itself we are great trees of splendor
Silver hands that wake to see
Flowers bring what is born unto flame
Rest on laurels of you and me

If this comes from butterflies of time
To softly rest upon our lips
Should we not place your hand in mine
And round this cup both sip

I find that I am empty but I must endure
Pass this test of time
Until my streams are filled once again
Your heart is tied to mine

Dearest desire, light of my darkness
Fill my soul delighted
Come and sip this cup with me…’tis full
When we are not divided

Reviews

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Neva, This was just exquisite, but then again everything you write is. But one speaks volumes upon volumes. " Dearest desire, light of my darkness fill my soul delighted. Come and sip this cup with me...tis full, When we are not divided" These words can speak to everyone in a different way depending on how they want to interpet it. Love it, it is a favorite. xo

[Joel M Frye]

This reads like a psalm, Neva. With tethered heart, may you sleep free.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Love it, reminds me of a pagan love ritual.

[Ruth]

One word - exceptional! This is really special Neva, love!
The dance with another is always fuelled to the pinnacle if not divided....the second stanza is mind blowing beauty!
Adorable, stunning and so deep!
xx

[TheSkyWritesHerName]

Very romantic & serene!

[Aidz]

I do have cookies....

Tales of love n stuff , wonderous write once again

[Dream Weaver]

Crisp clean and refreshing! Awaiting the day when division
becomes a whole.. Beautiful insight Neva…

[joshua deathdealer]

sighs* A lovely romantic write.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Romantically defined and resulted perfection, well done

[unknown]

Let all of your heart's desires be fulfilled and whole, wonderful poem :)