Painting in Colors of Love

Let me cradle your body in a promise that tumbles over the moon
When your life tends to be surrounded by a deep stillness
That leaves you wondering if you even know your destination
Or if calm waters your heart will find, or wander aimless

Let my words seep into the soil of your spirit as flaming arrows
Floating into your fears and so quickly piercing your skin
Until you can look at me and not be divided within your soul
Or be consumed by the places where emptiness begins

Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion
Sway your heart with eyes that paint in colors of love
So you will not remember this deep stillness that surrounds
Aimlessly wandering within your thoughts held thereof

Come and rest on the rock of memories forgotten long passed
While we look into the wilderness of each others soul
Until you can look at me and know we are not to be divided
Dive into these calm waters of mine and become whole

Author's Note

Artist: Christiane Vleugels - http://www.liveinternet.ru/community/3180911/post121210605/

Reviews

[kdpgrahi]

Signifies a great love I feel. Third stanza, "Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion
Sway your heart with eyes that paint in colors of love
So you will not remember this deep stillness that surrounds
Aimlessly wandering within your thoughts held thereof." so magnificent.

I liked it and digested it to my heart.

[brenda]

this is such a beautiful and sweet poem i love it !:)

[E.V. Black]

So beautiful. I love the comparison to love as being paints. Indeed, love (which is more than just being IN love) colors the world in bright colors, as negative emotions provide the shadowing. I don't think I could live without those bright colors myself. Life would seem much too dreary for that!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Your words are like a Tornado of passion... I could get lost in these words all day.

[Layla J Omorose]

Another great poem. The imagery is beautiful and once again like i have said for probably the 100th time the pictures that accompany your poem holds the very essence of the poem and makes it all the more real. Great job like always

[Muse]

You already know how much I love a fantastic picture. I want to hang this on my wall with a caption that reads:
Let me ignite your dreams under a blanket of whirling passion

The idiot below with the comment of "eh?", needs to be slapped!

[Scyrus123]

eh?

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful poem, the way you write is so amazing :)

[Sukriti Suki]

Wow...wonderful. The way you play with words and knit up this wonderful web of deep emotions, the reader can do nothing else but be mesmerised..

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I think I want to have my Wife read this to me...by candlelight.

This is very sumptuous.

[EMF]

Passionate, erotic and loving. Against the majority of 'Love' poetry that is written, this is incomparable. It's f*******g brilliant. Another one to walk straight into my lobrary. It has a power and momentun that carries it on and lodges it in the mind.