Wrapped Around Instinct

A shifting veil of shadows
filled my vision
as if requiring breath aimlessly.
I drew fire into my veins
as my suitor,
when I sought out release.

Looking down upon the back
of my fingers
Warm contentment followed hopefully.
Picking up my hand,
understanding flamed
this fire in me.

A caress pledged half a dream.
Bit my lip suggestively.
Sweet and gentle touches
became phantoms
of hope,
welcoming in, seductive pleas.

Instinct wrapped around a veil
of shadows.  
Found everything ever wanted.
Desire left kisses
on my brow,
whispered cries that taunted.

My soul gazed pleasures
state of mind,
took a deep breath of me.
Drawing fire into my veins
as my suitor,
I gave myself…shamelessly.

Author's Note

Firebird by fhrankee on deviantArt.com

Reviews

[Art]

an intense escape into the fire of desire Neva...one can only grasp at the idea of your visual pleasures...within the searching of sensuality through a dream state or the actuality of pleasure of thyself this poetic escape is filled with random and stable pleasure...

[emmajoy]

Words that give passion a good name, Neva! This is a torrent of extreme love wrapped in absolute physicality - a poem only you could write .. ' .. Sweet and gentle touches became phantoms ~ of hope,.. '

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A truyl devoured sense of antiquated acceptance and the sheer fatasy we all seem to escape to for protection and rest, a great read.

[Judy Ponceby]

Intense exquisite passion, Neva. Beautiful write. :)

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really intense and of course beautifully dark!

[Lily Mae]

Giving yourself up shamelessly into the arms of your suitor..ah.. :) I love that thought...xx

[VelvetRosetta]

To give without shame...beautiful.
Sensually sweet!

[Rene Velez]

desirable and endearing, really nice Neva....

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This swept me away. The wind picked me up and put me in a dream of wispy, firey universe.
Beautiful job~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very dreamy and sensuality that flows so poetically, just love it loads :)

[Extant]

*Smile* Lovely and intimate. Firery passion mixed with the caution of shadow, a dance of want and need. Two halves fighting while loving, however, always ending as equals.