The Wildest Loneliness

Sometimes, it seems that everything
my heart keeps as truth
I take with me
and lock deep inside of I am sorry
as I breathe the air twisted in the places
where I sleep.
Yet, there still exist nights
where there is no bed I can dream in
where I do not hear a melody
that feels naturally sweet.

Often, I stand in the corner
of all I have missed
then find myself walking proudly
beside the wildest loneliness
lying deep inside of
my stubborn heart.
Then suddenly,
my head clears inside of a silence
and I write poems
from the hands of angels
until the wildest loneliness
has to part.

Author's Note

*Alexander Khomenko Photography http://skhomenko.com/?info=genre

Reviews

[Mark]

I've read this several times without knowing how to comment on it. I think mostly because I am a thinker, and this piece goes beyond just thoughts. The imagery and emotions invoked by the words are more important here (IMO) then what the words actually say.

You invoke feelings and images through the words and I have trouble expressing how well you've done with it because I can not use my head to describe my reactions.

I can only say that from where I stand, this piece, accidental or not, has a real genius touch to it.

[just is]

Wow powerful, moving deep piece, so nicely done. Love the picture you used.

[Aidz]

Now this is what Ive been talking about Neva, real and from the heart n mind...layered upon leaking truths

[Ed Hart]

well, now there's a lady worth sharing a heart with, and a nice bottle of wine

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a really great write. I can relate to it...because that's how I was just feeling. I love relateable pieces like this. The words were very well put together. I could feel the emotions when I read it. I am glad that I read it. Thanks for sharing. :3

[Zachary_James]

Your words are always just so stunning, and once again i find myself at a loss of words to describe how i feel about this peace, it is just so stunning, beautiful and briliant. You always have a way of writing a peace ( Such as this one). so beautifully and so pure, I love this...