With My Naked Soul

Dark cascading whispers hide
within your serenity
from painful hours that have fallen
like leaves
in your sleep.
If I could bury those hours
deep away from where you think
perhaps your heart would no longer suffer,
and your peace, you could keep.

Inside of a daydream or two
containing soothing moments,
I would love
to softly caress your hands
with the gladness in my heart.
I would send a smile to sit
inside the place that you call home
when your eyes are open
and your visions
holding sharp.

I would dance upon your chest
with my naked soul,
if it would take away the painful hours
your mind continues
to be faithful to.
Don't you know that life itself
has written your name
on everything known as me
and that I was born
to comfort you?

Author's Note

Photography Marie Grimaud

Reviews

[rivers]

Truly inspirational soul speak...After 3 reads I get 3 perspectives...the mind's conversation with it's own heart and soul and the second the thoughts of another soul dear to the writer...The third perspective combines both and there are beautiful lines that phase all three persecutions...Only Neva knows and only I know how much I love this sensitive masterpiece of soul speak understanding...

[Billie Atterberry]

wow amazing poem i absolutely love it

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing words allowed the reader to feel the kind desire and hope in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Emerald Seas]

Such an enjoyable read. A softly spoken love poem that delivers a vivid picture without being heavily laden with emotion.
"If I could bury those hours
deep away from where you think
perhaps your heart would no longer suffer,
and your peace, you could keep."
Wonderfully expressed sentiment!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very cool indeed.

[Poetic Beauty]

Taking away painful hours is what many of us would like to do when loved ones are feel excruciating amounts of pain whether from an illness or some other reason. This is done with outstanding wording.

[Tate Morgan]

I would dance upon your chest
with my naked soul,
Now thats profound!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is what i call loyalty and commitment... such a sentimentally beautiful write.

[Ruth]

When I read this earlier, I was transfixed...your poetry of late has become a realisation, a pinnacle...teetering on the edge...xoxo ♥

[Tarry Franck]

cascading whispers hide
within your serenity

I would dance upon your chest
with my naked soul

Love this!!!! Very inspiring.

[Henry]

I would dance upon your chest
with my naked soul,

A brilliant write.