Intimacy

Just a little something for the same contest as my other poem Tenderness!

Is my fingertips tracing your spine. 

Author's Note

Any constructive criticism is welcome!

Reviews

[SM Davis]

nicely done. The imagery here is very nice, however, being that you only had seven words, the placement of the word "is" seems almost a waste. I would think the word "is" would be implied regardless of what words you chose. It doesn't retract from from image, but it's almost like spending five dollars for ice cream that you already have in your freezer. Just my opinion, and again, it doesn't retract from the image...

I'm giving 100 because the image is crisp...

[Wildecat]

Couldn't have described this better myself. Well done.

[Jordan]

The imagery here is very nice, I agree, with just 7 words that you had included in here. The image you have displayed here is very crisp, very...intimate, I guess one could say. It's a beautiful way to say this, and a wonderful way to say it at that. Great job on this! I look forward to reading more works like this!

[Vlazuvius]

Who needs hiakus?