Perseverance...

A senryu.

Fragile wings flutter,
Striving to survive the storm,
Frail, she perseveres...

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I think Neverland must have a different sort of writer, one with that puts it out like a map.



Nice...............................

[Quill~]

:) thank you.

[zainul]

Beauty of the struggle of butterfly to survive the storm with fragile wings is amazing.
Well penned.

[Leigh]

This butterfly, like your senryu is stronger than it looks

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo and words are amazing. I agree with the thoughts in the poem. You are a very good writer. Very hard to write poetry with purpose using so few words. You do. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Quill~]

I am humbled and appreciate your words. Thank you for reading.

[That_Girl]

Super smooth, one of the best I've read on here. I love it!

[Quill~]

wow! Thank you!

[Grey]

"she perseveres" Strong

[Quill~]

:) Thank you, Grey.

[Quill~]

As strong as she is, to survive
Like she came also out of her cocoon before.

Lovely Quill.

E.L.

[Quill~]

:) Thank you, Miss Elisa...your wise words are appreciated.

[TheDuchessDiary]

Awww... This is beautiful!

[Quill~]

:) Thank you!

[Jordan's Back]

This is about the Loveliest deepest Haiku I have seen on this site. Excellent.

[Quill~]

You're so sweet. :) Thanks.

[Jordan's Back]

Always :) Feel free to message me :)

[Quill~]

sure thing sweetie. :)

[Jordan's Back]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY xD

[Quill~]

Ha ha! You're too cute!

[quinfinn]

astounding depth for such a shallow pool...awesome

[Quill~]

:) Thank you for your wise words.