Ink Black

Ink Black

A Poem by Chase Weik
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Not all is lost

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Her tears stain the floor
She's alone in the darkness 
Someone worth saving

© 2016 Chase Weik


Author's Note

Chase Weik
This is my first haiku so I really hope that you guys enjoyed it! I'm very open to any and all constructive criticism! Thanks for reading!

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I really like this! Deep emotion in few words. Just great!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This haiku may be short, but it has a deeper meaning to it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this, I can really picture the girl. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very deep with good simplicity

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it.
It's simply...Perfect!
I totally suck at haiku...and that's frustrating, because they're so totally cool.
I love when someone does them well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Weik

7 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it!

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Added on November 1, 2016
Last Updated on December 1, 2016
Tags: Haiku, Poem

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Chase Weik
Chase Weik

Litchfield, CT



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