Bids her Come

Bids her Come

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer

Perched on the edge, I see her feathered skirt ruffle.

With an outstretched neck the little bird leans into uncertainty.

Until the tiny zephyr bids her come.


© 2024 Cherrie Palmer


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visually beauty to this with just a bit anxiety with the little bird leaning into uncertainty...this says a lot with so few words. lovely writing Miss Cherrie.

Posted 5 Days Ago


So interesting what one can do with the 3 line format when one steps outside the parameters of 5-7-5. 'zephyr' is a lovely word with its many classical associations. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Week Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Week Ago

Thank you Tony :) I hope you are doing well and yes, like you I like the a simple three liner.
Few words but delightful, visual and beckoning. You have captured reality with your charming; representatives and left a magical footprint, Cherrie. Smiling. You have created a beautiful visual, dear friend .

The sun smiles and I wonder how you are, if you are waking to bright moments and warmth in your your days. Hope so.

Warmest wishes. my friend

(Super elegant reading glasses, too)

Posted 1 Week Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Week Ago

Emma dear I'm doing well. Life is pretty busy at the moment. I'm hoping July will slow down. Bur I.. read more
You are pretty good at this writing thing.



Posted 1 Month Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Weeks Ago

:) thank you David. I'm getting out of practice of late. I've been so busy. I can't wait to get b.. read more
I love to watch birds, especially when there may be a mating call....they anticipate and wait and then some friend comes to their open arms....very vivid and meaningful..
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Month Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Month Ago

Thank you Betty:) I'm with you waiting birds and nature is a great past time.
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

you're very welcome
Warmly, B.

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Added on May 1, 2024
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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Springfield , MO



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..

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