Death is in me

I was mad when i wrote this

When I feel like hell

I just wanna kill myself

The people that I care for the most

End up killing me more

The judging and laughing

Just make me start crying

They don't seem to care

So I get hurt even more

I sit in the darkness alone

With only one light of hope

The light of God

That has kept me alive

A rush of electricity

To get away from this life

I just wanna scream "HELP!"

To get through my whole life

Author's Note

this is how i feel most of the time when i get mad

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is depressing to read. Those emotions sometimes aren't good especially when people are putting you down like that. You display your anger in a way that makes the reader feel pity. I like that.

[a donkey, briefly]

"and though the rules of the road have been lodged
it's only people''s games you got to dodge.."
bob dylan

ppl suck and we learn from it hopefully

suicidal thoughts are normal..it's sweeping it under the rug that's abnormal

[Jeremy Baker]

I hope life changes for you, for the better. This poem is heart breaking to read ...