Make a Wish Upon a Star

Villanelle: Type of poem with certain rhyme scheme and number of stanzas.

With the joy of a pronounced desire comes�"

When fulfilled�"the saving of a nation;

The pinning down of the wings of Freedom

 

Come forth from thy bottomless holes: Desperation

That produces in fury haste lovely sensation, that in addition

With the joy of a pronounced desire comes.

 

Cannot see you a façade of intentions�"

Distorting their Vision, their Future’s proportions:

The pinning down the wings of Freedom

 

From above a falling star fickly sprinkles down, in fact,

A wishing star with a wicked note in its underlying contract:

“With the joy of a pronounced desire comes

The pinning down of the wings of Freedom.”

Reviews

[la Abeja]

As always, I love your poems! This one has a great rhyming sceme to it. Keep it up!

[Katie Greene]

This is a very well done poem. Your wording is amazing and I loved the ending especially. Thanks for sharing!