Truth behind the lies

the mask we hide and not reveal to anyone

Everyday we wear thousand smiles and evreydaywe hide away a thousand pains behind a mask. This mask hides the truth, because for the truth itself cannot be accepted. Everyday this mask gets heavier and heavier and everyday it becomes a part of who we are. The more its worn the more it feels like make up that can't come off. The more lies we put on the harder it is to break.  But a day shall come for when the truths behind the lies are revealed to somone who has the power to break it. The day shall come for when these things called "emotions" shall spread as if it were a butterfly, ready to fly far away from this reality that holds me down like gravity

Author's Note

i'm not that good and hope to get good critics thank you :D

Reviews

[quinfinn]

there is much subtle truth and a great deal of wisdom in these lines. it reads more like an essay than a poem, but if you break it into couplets it may be more visually appealing. it is a well written piece, and quite a pleasing and easy read.

[Clare the Artist]

thank you

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I really liked this. I agree the message and words are strong.
You do, indeed, know how to express your feelings very well. :)
Great job.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Renée]

I love the subject ! to me its more of a writing than a poem..but I could be wrong..because I am not a professional ..But the message and your words are strong and well written

[The Cute 1]

this is nice

[Ayanda Mteto]

I like this poem, it is simple and powerful as the truth you revealed.