Belong

Belong

A Poem by Colton Warr

She belongs in the temporary moments of a dream 

Taking me away from my nightmare screams

On my knees for my sins, her love redeems

She has, to this day, been my one and only theme 

She belongs to an unknown planet out in space 

I am crash landing and so I brace

The way back home I never want to retrace

Forever we are to roam the stars, hands interlaced

She belongs in the great blue sky

If up is not the way then I have gone awry

We can lay with the clouds until we die

If her touch is the rain, I never want to be dry

She belongs to the vastness of the ocean

Which ever way her tide pulls, that is my motion

Like to the sand the waters soaks, she is my devotion

I have crashed into her like a wave and I love the commotion

She belongs to all of the wonders of our galaxy

She belongs to all of history’s kings and queens

She belongs to the Angel who plays the harp and sings

She belongs to every golden thing, yet here she is kissing me 

Reviews

[rickm97]

Love is the true sweetness of life. Nothing compares.
It is everything...
...in its absence we are nothing except lost, awaiting that gentle rush to overwhelm us once again.
It is life's greatest joy...
...and its greatest pain.
It is as a dichotomy in nature.
I miss her so.

Well done, my friend.
I hope that you find love as true as that of my Karin...
...for then you will have everything.

[Colton Warr]

I could have not said it any better than that, my friend! So beautiful! I can't even begin to imagine or comprehend how it would feel to lose someone as perfect as your wife must have been. And I know she was because she picked a strong and loving man to be with. You will see her again one day and you will get to be with her for all of eternity. I am so grateful that you read this piece!

P.S. It makes my soul happy that my words can remind you of someone who sounds like an angel. Just wanted to thank you for giving me that opportunity. Thank you for your support.

[rickm97]

She was the strong one, and she truly was an angel.
But she, like all of us, was flawed and had her struggles.
Life can get very ugly sometimes, and soon I'll try to depict her courage in dealing with it.
Thanks.

[Mary G]

Love it!!!! im sure whoever you wrote this about loved it. Amazing to have a love like that

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Mary! Yes, she indeed loved it! I'm glad you enjoyed it as well! Thank you so much for giving this a read!

[Andrew Robinson]

Glorious poem.. Angelic and True. Thanks for sharing.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Andrew! I appreciate the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for giving this a read!

[Andrew Robinson]

You're welcome! Hahah keep it up.

[Emily]

I love the beginning!
Keep it up!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Emily! I'm glad you enjoyed these words! I appreciate your continuing support! Thanks for reading!

[Emily]

Your welcome!

[Peacegal]

Very lovely and deep. I like this

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thank you for the kind words! I appreciate you giving this a read!

[paulina misiewicz]

I've read few of your poems and must say you're very good with illustrating the pure emotions in a way that encourages self-reflection but also admiration for your writing. It's beautiful and easily absorb-able! you explore the familiar grounds and I think many people can relate! I love your limitless imagination for expressing thoughts and feelings :D

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! Your words are too kind! I am grateful for your kind review and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and can self-reflect by reading my words. I am honored that something I have written can do that. Thank you so much for giving this a read!

[ApKWrites]

Love's a great subject to write about and you managed to portray it perfectly!
Well done...and I love the rhymes you used;)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I appreciate your kind and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed the rhymes! I appreciate your review!

[Paavana Varma]

This is beautiful! I truly wish this poem could go on and on and on .... Never stop writing! :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Paavana! You are too sweet! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you so much for giving it a read!

[Urja Gokani]

wow you are very good with your thoughts umm.. good rhymes amazingly written keep it up honestly speaking its a good piece of writing :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I appreciate your kind and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you so much for giving it a read!

[Urja Gokani]

welcome :)

[Amber Lily]

Being in love is an amazing thing. It makes you think the world and beyond of the person your with. As you said, she is everything. Love is one of those things that can be hard to express and explain, but I think you do very well :)

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Amber! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! I love being in love with her. It is something that exists within my veins. I appreciate you giving this a read!

[Koari]

I fell in love with this poem. It's so sweet, expressive, and beautiful.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Koari! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thank you so much for giving this a read!