Three Boys

You said that I revived you

And I thought that you were right

You said "It was you who saved me

And gave me sunshine in the night"

 

And you left me all alone

My heart torn and aching

And with soft, silent thuds

I realized it was actually breaking

 

Till another came around

With charm, grace, and called me "baby"

Though sometimes I doubted him

He still called my his "special lady"

 

Then, without warning

He turned around and made it end

Saying "I hope you aren't mad at me

And that I can still be your friend"

 

Finally, I have this one

And I pray that he will never

Break, bend, and twist my heart

Because I'm hoping for forever

 

Three boys, with one thing in common

I let them love me

The first two fled, reasons unknown

And hopefully, the last one, like them will not be

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great flow to this excellent poem!

[KAREN]

Boys, you never know. If it's ment to be it'll happen. Excellent write, love the flow !

[your a challenge!]

i understand it more knowing who they are

[your a challenge!]

ohhhhh! :) haha

[CompellingComposer]

Calm down, Candice! In order it's Brandon, Sam, and lastly Daniel. Two are my exes, one is my boyfriend.

[your a challenge!]

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[CompellingComposer]

Candice, you aren't completely right, either! Robert isn't in this poem!

[foreveryours<3]

well I didn't use my brain. I have been writing all day my brain is tired

[your a challenge!]

Hannah, its very ovious who are! Robert, Brandon, and Daniel! haha, and your the smart one? haha

[foreveryours<3]

I know 2 but who is the 3rd?