Distance Of Two Hearts

I wrote this poem wile I was spending the weekend at my grandparent's house and I missed my crush.

Distance is but a mere word when it comes to the power of love.

It means nothing and the love spans forever.

Yet there is one enemy trying to break the chain.

It's name is Missing You.

He hacks and wields his deathly sword, but the love remains 'tween the two. 

They feel the tugs and yanks and pain that come from Missing You. 

Eventually he inhabits one of the poor couples bodies. 

The weaker one is always the one.

I'm sad to say...I'm Missing You!

Author's Note

Critique me to the furthest extension. In every aspect of writing please, and anything you don't like.