Morning

I really need to pay more attention; wish I could afford attention

The beautiful red glow

from behind the cedar line

it rises gaining color

I stand soaking up the beauty

sipping coffee

ready for the day to begin

it peaks atop the trees

Damn! Blinded again.....

Author's Note

Just a bit of silliness first thing in the morning...I do this often BTW

Reviews

[Devanshu Rajput]

a descriptive poem describing beautiful morning....

[Constance Payne]

Thank You for reading

[Devanshu Rajput]

welcome

[Eddie Phillips]

It's not so silly. I liked the simplicity and the visual description. To stare at the beautiful sunrise in the morning is a blessing not everyone gets a chance to enjoy. :)

[Constance Payne]

Thank you for reading. It is too true about being a blessing not all are blessed with. Some by physical and some by mental / emotional blindness.

[Writer #00]

A bit of silliness in the morning seems like a great way to start off your day. Humor, then breakfast. On a "this poem must have deep, philosophical (heheh, deephilosophical) meaning" level: this poem could be interpreted to mean that true beauty is lost to the eyes of man because it is blinding, rendering sight useless in the understanding of it.

Nice little poem either way one looks at it. : )

^.^/100

[Constance Payne]

Thank You for reading. I had not considered that side of it; was just silly enough not to be aware of the position of the rising sun. I like both meanings.
I love seeing things in more than one light, because life is never one dimensional and to be able to see more than one is a blessing. Thank You.

[Writer #00]

No problem, a one dimensional life would be creepy.

[PurpleQuartz]

I like this, it's really great!

[Constance Payne]

Thank You for reading.

[Dr. Wood ?]

blinded by nature.....nothing wrong in that

[Constance Payne]

Thank You for reading. Yes, I get blinded by the sun a lot.

[Claire Twinn]

Sometimes we don't stare enough, sometimes too much! A nice reminder to enjoy simple beauties.

[Constance Payne]

Thank You for reading. The simple beauties in life get missed so often and they can change our whole day, which in turn can change the day of those around us.

[Rita L. Sev]

Enjoyed this! I adore the sunrise - and am often blinded by it, too! Just Mother Nature's way of saying that she's still the boss! Nice imagery (until you were blinded, that is!)

[Constance Payne]

Thank You for reading. I am blessed to be able to enjoy each sunrise, blinded or not.

[Abby]

A great write, that's for sure. You've done a great job just telling about the beauty tha you've seen. :)

Keep up the good work, Constance. :)

Abby :)

[Constance Payne]

Thank You for reading. It is amazing how it changes with the seasons but is always beauty at its best.

[Abby]

Very true. It's something that never gets old since it's beauty is always so vivid, and beautiful every single time you see it.

[Chris]

Nothing silly at all... "Goodmorning..."

I almost let one escape here - within YOUR space.. that wouldn't do.

"I sometimes ...see"

[Constance Payne]

Thank You for reading, loved this.

[Holly Mason]

love the blinded again
you have fed us a beautiful image with your words...truly
silliness in the morning is the best!!!!
for trying to be silly this is a very good write I like it much
thank you for sharing

[Constance Payne]

Thank You for reading. Silliness is important in life I believe; it is the only way to deal with life.