Take Me Away

Take Me Away

A Poem by Tom Robert Cowpey
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My First Published FreeVerse Poetry

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take me away
take me far from this place
to a place with no people
ill be gone with no trace

leave nothing behind
memories fade and they die
in a place where the blind
can see all
in a place where the deaf
hear more not less

to a place where we're safe
to a place that is warm,


take me away to a place
where we're equal,
too a place with no people

ill be gone with no trace
leaving nothing to waste
except all memories
lost that where evil,


take me away to a place that is hidden
a place where religions forbidden
a place with no guns
a safe place to have fun
can you take me
if not then ill run..

© 2013 Tom Robert Cowpey


Author's Note

Tom Robert Cowpey
5min FREEVERSE

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Well, that's hardly free verse Tom, in fact it's very strongly structured. There are a couple of typo's or misspellings - due probably to the fact that it was written in a hurry, but it's certainly an interesting piece.
Line 4 - 'I'll' not 'ill'. V2. line 3 - 'to' not 'too' and again, line 4 'I'll'. V2. Line 7 'were' not 'where'. Verse 3 Line 2 - 'religion's' and last line again 'I'll'.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom Robert Cowpey

7 Years Ago

thankyou, and what i meant about freeverse was i literally wrote it line by line no planning involve.. read more



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written in five minutes? i could not do that. Wow!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, that's hardly free verse Tom, in fact it's very strongly structured. There are a couple of typo's or misspellings - due probably to the fact that it was written in a hurry, but it's certainly an interesting piece.
Line 4 - 'I'll' not 'ill'. V2. line 3 - 'to' not 'too' and again, line 4 'I'll'. V2. Line 7 'were' not 'where'. Verse 3 Line 2 - 'religion's' and last line again 'I'll'.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom Robert Cowpey

7 Years Ago

thankyou, and what i meant about freeverse was i literally wrote it line by line no planning involve.. read more

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Tom Robert Cowpey
Tom Robert Cowpey

Perth, WA, Australia



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I have been writing poety on paper since a young chap, Ive many views on life as i am lucky enough to have experiences 2 different culutres first hand. I believe that this has widened my knowlegde whe.. more..

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