Hierarchy of the Earth and Stars

There's a reason why we are here...
we are based off senses.

Humans,
thought.

Dogs,
smell.

Bats,
sound.

And still,
dirt.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You said it all in so few words. Life is simple. Your words told it with accurately and wisdom. I like the ending. A beautiful poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

I loved the ending...what's the meaning of life?

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I wish you had elaborated on this!! You started my mind wondering..I wanted more!!

Thinking mans poetry.

[Nova]

I think this one is my favorite. It was so simple yet, it gave the reader(me in particular) something big to think on.

"And still,
dirt."

This last line(my fav) is saying that we might be bright creatures but we can't compare to earth or the stars (well...at least I think so.)

^^

[Cassiopia Summers]

I love the meanings of your poems and the fact that they make you think. They make you ponder and actually make you use your brain.

You are a wonderful writer and I absolutely love the fact that you write.

[vincentbals]

Again an ambigious poem... i need some time to think about this one. I like the riddle thing that comes along with your poetry. I hope you don't see that as a bad mark, or whatsoever.

I really enjoy what you write.

I guess i'm gonna take some time and try to figure this poem out.

Keep up the good work!

[HappyTaylor]

So simple, but so....complex! WONDERFUL poem.

[Christopher.Holmberg]

Says so much with so little man, great write. Furthermore, I am not me.