The game of war

It's a hostile situation

There's as many teams that wanna play

It puts tears in mothers and wives eyes

Blood,sweat and tears runs down the players body

Nobody see's the game coming

There's no cheats or extra lives

No restarts or rematches

You have to fight for your life

Putting on the line everything you have

Not knowing if you'll ever come home

Showing them that old men and women do cry

It destroys people and lifes

Maybe you think its nothing

Til you witness it with your own eyes

It's war

Blood, sweat, tears

Explosions, wounds gashes

Un cureable injuries, un erasable memories, un fixable bones

Bodies laying on the ground

Wounded or decease

Blind or death

These happen because of mankind creation

The forbidden creation war

You might think its a waste of time

That its useless

Freedom is the reason

Countless people risk everything on the line to save us and america

Frustrated and angry

Heartless and complaints

Distance separates mothers and fathers

Daughters and sons

Death and injury is the risk

There's no price for this game

It puts flames and lead toward the players body

Never wanna quit

Quitting isnt even close to the players mind

Putting your all into it

Not able to sleep without your gun

Not feeling safe around every corner

But this is war

Blood,sweat and tears runs down the players body

Nobody see's the game coming

There's no cheats or extra lives

No restarts or rematches

You have to fight for your life

Putting on the line everything you have

Not knowing if you'll ever come home

Showing them that old men and women do cry

It destroys people and lifes

Maybe you think its nothing

Til you witness it with your own eyes

It's war

Blood, sweat, tears

Explosions, wounds gashes

Un cureable injuries, un erasable memories, un fixable bones

Bodies laying on the ground

Wounded or decease

Blind or death

These happen because of mankind creation

The forbidden creation war

Mankind worst creation

Taking lives

Taking children

Taking  parents

Fighting for their lives

The high fling, Air Force

The ready steady, Army

The hard fighting, Marines

And the set sailing, Navy

They their lives on the line

War is the game

The game you never wanna play

Reviews

[Silencer]

It puts flames and lead toward the players body
Never wanna quit
Quitting isnt even close to the players mind

Not true.

These happen because of mankind creation

Confusion is of the devil.


But overall not bad. With spelling corrections and a few small edits, this could be highly impressive.

[ShadowOfTheDay]

A few grammar mistakes. But very interesting (: