My love

My love

Wraps around you like the warmest hug.

My love

Is what helps keep you snug.

My love

Transcends time and space.

My love

Is a warm embrace.

My love

Is always there.

My love

I always care.

Reviews

[Anita Frader]

Sweet love poem, Chixo. 💛

[Chixo]

Thank you, Anita ☺️

[Poetic Beauty]

This sums up how long be should be and feel in a simple way that states the emotion clearly

[John the Baptist]

A very moving statement of devotion here. I would suggest, however, that you drop the commas after the first lines of each couplet. It would make for a smoother delivery.

[Chixo]

Thanks for your feedback. I considered it before but I'll edit now.

[John the Baptist]

To me, it looks a lot better now. The repetitive first lines carry the reader's eye very nicely.