I Can't Remember

I Can't Remember

A Poem by Kyline Freed

I can’t remember that day,
The day we fell in love.
It might have been like those people,
The people who start out as friends,
They start out as friends and then one day,
BAM!
You realize you’ve been in love all this time,
You fell in love with the person you grew up with,
But you didn’t know it until that day,
Until that day when he said he loved you.

© 2014 Kyline Freed


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Wow! This poem is just plain wonderful. I have experienced this myself, except that my (guy) best friend found out and left me all alone in the cold. But this poem is simply amazing and I wish I could have experienced it so I could relate better

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like this! It's very sweet and innocent - I like that it's simplistic. I also think the new perspective you've taken on the standard love poem - by exploring it from a "friends to lovers" angle - is really interesting and innovative. Well done! I look forward to checking out more of your poetry!


Posted 9 Years Ago


awwwwwwwwwwww. This is really sweet. :) Beautiful write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Konigin

9 Years Ago

WOW Really???? You got skill girl! :D
Kyline Freed

9 Years Ago

yep >.< lol :P
Konigin

9 Years Ago

haha Can't wait to read more!!
Really nice. It's always strange how quickly two people go from being best friends to being something more. This was a purely beautiful poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kyline Freed

9 Years Ago

Thanks!!!!
Beautiful, simply beautiful!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Kyline Freed
Kyline Freed

Imperial, MO



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