My innermost me

My innermost me

A Poem by Crosby Idasa
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Just a piece for all trying to be awakened, keep trying

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I was sad and lost of worlds, my eyes were getting reddish my tears was about to drip.
I couldn't even say a word all I was doing that time was to wrap marijuana and sip on Stout mixed with palm wine!

Oh my soul, they have played with you carelessly and they are trying to destroy the body!

Oh my innermost me, when will you wake, when will you do all the greatest manifestation of this moment and the future...is it today or tomorrow or when?

My innermost me, all you're seeking is to get it from the right point, is it left or right!


I need to actualise my real reason for being alive, all I need is to make use of my innermost desirable soul, I need to so I can touch the universe and feel it!

ICE

© 2019 Crosby Idasa


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What do I think about this? Well, I love the first line - great visual there.

I think we have all been here, in this time and space the narrator talks of. I also believe there are many avenues to take to touch the universe, grab at reality, swim in love, flatten into equanimity. If we unfetter, allow ourselves to dissipate, learn to practice acceptance at all levels - well then we are half way there.

What is our reason to be alive? Well of me it is so we can keep on creating, keep pushing the outer edges of reality further and further and in our own uniqueness, we are able to push, shove, gently nudge and the expansion just keeps on rolling out. keeping the motion, never settling in, realising change is constant and it is up to us if we ebb or if we flow.

Nice words to bounce off of. Great words to allow me to deep dive into self.

nice to meet you :d

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

2 Years Ago

Thank you my dear KWP, your review means a lot. You are a good writer, reading your review will exte.. read more
KWP

2 Years Ago

well thanks ;) and you are most welcome X



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What do I think about this? Well, I love the first line - great visual there.

I think we have all been here, in this time and space the narrator talks of. I also believe there are many avenues to take to touch the universe, grab at reality, swim in love, flatten into equanimity. If we unfetter, allow ourselves to dissipate, learn to practice acceptance at all levels - well then we are half way there.

What is our reason to be alive? Well of me it is so we can keep on creating, keep pushing the outer edges of reality further and further and in our own uniqueness, we are able to push, shove, gently nudge and the expansion just keeps on rolling out. keeping the motion, never settling in, realising change is constant and it is up to us if we ebb or if we flow.

Nice words to bounce off of. Great words to allow me to deep dive into self.

nice to meet you :d

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

2 Years Ago

Thank you my dear KWP, your review means a lot. You are a good writer, reading your review will exte.. read more
KWP

2 Years Ago

well thanks ;) and you are most welcome X
purpose gives You ambition, gives You a meaning of living, when it's driven by your heart's desires and passion I can assure You that You will touch the universe, some people walks few paths before knowing it, some walk many, and some know it right away, some get lost and some try many things, in all cases the taste of finding what You were born for will be the same, ultimate joy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

2 Years Ago

Thank you for such a nice review as this, meaningful and I appreciate

ICE
A sense of dipping in emotion here, leading the reader to empathize and not rule, well done, good read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

4 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas, well thought
Really good sis. Real good.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Crosby  Idasa

4 Years Ago

Who is a sis? Anyway thanks for the review

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