Why Don't You Care?

A poem when you wonder if the love of your life ever really cared.

I'm screaming

My head is spinning

I have no where to go

 

Why don't you care anymore?

Why don't you listen?

Why do you put me through so much pain?

 

I don't know what to do

I am just so confused

My heart aches from everything

 

I'm leading myself to you

I'm trying to let go

I need to find a way out

 

So I'm still screaming

My head is still spinning

And I still have no where to go.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[My Wildest Dreams]

Love this one

[0_o Abbie]

This is very well written. One thing tho, the line where you say "Why don't you care anymore?" Seems a bit lengthy. Maybe just leave off the anymore and just as 'Why don't you care?'. Or leave it as it is. ;] I like this poem alot it really moves well. :D