Heartectomy

Heartectomy

A Poem by Poetic Injustice

Can I cut you out of my heart and leave the rest?

Cause the pain of loving you is killing me

I wish someone would just crack open my chest

And perform a heartectomy

~~~~~

Will sanity return if I remove you from my brain?

I think about you way to much it seems

But is it my brain I have to tame if my heart remains the same?

Without a heartectomy

~~~~~

Call 911, get me a doctor, make it stat

The feeling went from good to bad when you left me

I hope the diagnosis supports my theory that

I just need a heartectomy

© 2009 Poetic Injustice


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Wow.. what a brilliant new occupation.. it would certainly make millions and so many would line up to have it done.. which would be sad as there would be no fear of pain.. love would not feel like love with that missing factor.. we would always be happy thus happy would become a normal status.. lol.. certainly a nice thought though.. I can think of once or twice where I would have lined up for that!!! I love deeply thus I pain deeply as well.. but I think it has more to do with the mind.. at least for women it is 95% in the mind 5% in the physical.. they already have lobotomy.. lol.. I don't know that I would want to try that one though!!! I can feel the emotion in your stuggle to get over someone pretty clearly here!!! =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Oh don't we all wish sometimes we can get rid of our aching hearts. This was a very good piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Who is this person that has you so messed up�?

I feel for you�. But you will find someone new�


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahhhh but if your heartectomy was performed...you would not be able to love your friends here on WC and that would surely kill us all. lol
Seriously...my eyes filled up as it makes such sense...ridiculously so !!! I know someone who is experiencing your feeling and is suffering terribly. Ouch !!! As for sanity returning...who knows...will it ever...does it affect our very being for ever. Hope not !!!
This is brillianty written and I love it...so it,s going right to my favs. pal.
Babsie Bee XXX

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. what a brilliant new occupation.. it would certainly make millions and so many would line up to have it done.. which would be sad as there would be no fear of pain.. love would not feel like love with that missing factor.. we would always be happy thus happy would become a normal status.. lol.. certainly a nice thought though.. I can think of once or twice where I would have lined up for that!!! I love deeply thus I pain deeply as well.. but I think it has more to do with the mind.. at least for women it is 95% in the mind 5% in the physical.. they already have lobotomy.. lol.. I don't know that I would want to try that one though!!! I can feel the emotion in your stuggle to get over someone pretty clearly here!!! =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If only there was such a thing......sigh......alas, we must perform the operation on our own.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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