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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Like a Bamboo, I Have Got to be Resilient

Like a Bamboo, I Have Got to be Resilient

A Poem by The Daisy
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The tittle pretty much says it.

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A storm surging
with its sharp claws
ready to rip the bounty lush
that are my tresses, limbs and roots.

But yes, I am young
The sky awaits for the stretches of my arms and fingers
The earth drools for my stomps, tears and excesses
And oh yes, yes like a bamboo, I have got to be resilient.


© 2013 The Daisy


Author's Note

The Daisy
Only with honesty that a fellow like me thrives.

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Well spoken! Bamboo is one of the best of metaphors. It's much more than resilient. It could be the subject of a rather long poem by those with mystic insight inspired by bamboo. Most anything may inspire, but bamboo is special. Bamboo and tea together make a good pair whose combination is greater than their sum.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Daisy

10 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
That's right! Bounce back from the bad. Have that temper tantrem, but always be resilient! Angi~

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Daisy

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Angi. :)
The title does say it. Great metaphor.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Daisy

10 Years Ago

I appreciate this so much. :)
Lovely write...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nicely done...enjoyed reading your words...Rose

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Daisy

10 Years Ago

Thank you. I am so elated to finally join in.
SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thats good...and welcome to the cafe...Rose
Great anthropomorphic imagery here with a very concise use of language, which creates fantastic imagery - you can really imagine that you're there.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Daisy

10 Years Ago

Thank you for this great review, Niallgimino. I am bamboo that is right outside my window.
Concise & strong message within your words. Enjoyed this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Daisy

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Frieda. It means a lot really.
Not bad.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Daisy

10 Years Ago

Thank you. :) I guess that's a good starter.

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The Daisy
The Daisy

Quezon City, Philippines



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