Devil Biological Dad

Devil Biological Dad

A Poem by Dalebear

 

You are such an evil man

How you wrecked my life with an evil plan

Your poisonous and twisted brain

That made you thought everyday let give Dale pain

You with that rusty voice

Saying either way I have no choice

You with that nasty grin

Sent shivers up my skin

You with them horrible hands

With all the orders and demands

You with them big feet

That kicked me with every beat

You don’t care what you done

Even though I was your son

Look what you made me become

How I feel dead and numb

You given me flashbacks every day and night

Like hell what you thinking it is not right

Well this is all you’re doing

With all the pain you caused and head screwing

All the years on I haven’t forgot

About what you did to me that evil plot

With the pain it just increases

So now I have to pick up my own pieces

So just get out of my head

To be honest just drop down dead

 

 

© 2010 Dalebear


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. it truly breaks my heart ... that something like this could've happened ... something as terrible happened to me ... and it's a nightmare to deal with it ... i think you are brilliant in the way you take it out ... this is powerful poetry ... very, very, very powerful ... and it's of help to anyone who has had to go through abuse of any kind ... you really inspire ... you inspire me to be brave and courageous ... and it means the world to me ... and i know how you mean that last line ... and i think he will ... not literally ... but he'll feel the wrong he committed when you shine and shine and shine ... and become such a star ... and such a rockstar ... that when he sees you ... he knows that all his attempts to harm you have failed ... it really is a matter of a few more years ... but i know the pain ... it's much too much pain ... and i know the flashbacks ... and i know about the nightmares too ... and i know that together we can be brave and make clean days ... and soon ... like you say ... we'll rock the world with all our might ... go dale go ... you rock ...

millions of pringles of love,
serah

Posted 13 Years Ago


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REMARKABLE!!! Powerful and straight forward. This tugs on the heart strings.


Posted 13 Years Ago


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my dearest dale - it is gut wrenching - the monstrosity you had to go through - you - the genius gem artist spectacular poet little warrior bear - you speak fearlessly - and yes - i want to thank you too - your courage makes me courageous - your invincible spirit makes me want to be infallible - you inspire - yes you do - you inspire like no one ever can!
one foot in front of the other - a step at time - we will dream of uninterrupted, peaceful sleep - and good days - and we will break through the pain - let it simmer - but pledge to fight it - and the world will be yours - i know it will!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. it truly breaks my heart ... that something like this could've happened ... something as terrible happened to me ... and it's a nightmare to deal with it ... i think you are brilliant in the way you take it out ... this is powerful poetry ... very, very, very powerful ... and it's of help to anyone who has had to go through abuse of any kind ... you really inspire ... you inspire me to be brave and courageous ... and it means the world to me ... and i know how you mean that last line ... and i think he will ... not literally ... but he'll feel the wrong he committed when you shine and shine and shine ... and become such a star ... and such a rockstar ... that when he sees you ... he knows that all his attempts to harm you have failed ... it really is a matter of a few more years ... but i know the pain ... it's much too much pain ... and i know the flashbacks ... and i know about the nightmares too ... and i know that together we can be brave and make clean days ... and soon ... like you say ... we'll rock the world with all our might ... go dale go ... you rock ...

millions of pringles of love,
serah

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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