Rose Petals

I sit and look at the rose petals

spread-out upon my driveway

every memory I have of you is there

your smile,

your charm,

everything...

everything about you is a pretty

bouquet  of rose petals

spread-out across my heart

♥♥♥

Reviews

[Kotsidou Elmira]

Beautiful from the beggining till the end.

[kaylynnmelody♥]

Aw, this really warmed my heart! It was great! Such a sweet poem! Thank you. :)

[unknown]

Romantic :)

[Aidz]

This is a well thought out write, well done

[Allie :)]

Slightly mysterious...I don't understand why rose petals would be on a driveway, but your feelings are good, and this is a good write nontheless :D

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

nice! u can feel the emotion flowing through this

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

Such a lovely poem. It is beautifully written and it flows fabulously! I like the metaphor of the rose petals, it's quiet original, and just plain fabulous!!! Absolutely amazing, great job!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the use of rose petals in the poem. I like the feel and emotion of love and happiness in your words. A very strong ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote