You Belong With Me

Inspired by Taylor Swift's "You Belong With Me"

We've known each other for years
And I've never felt this way before...
About anybody.. except for you..
We understand each other,
We laugh at each others lame jokes
We make fun of each other for the stupidest things
We have a deeper connection...
You belong with me
I actually care about you
Unlike her
The fact that you're captain of the football team
Just proves a point..
That she only likes you for what you have
Instead of for who you are...
But not me, I loved you before you could throw a football
That's why you belong with me
I love you more and more each day,
Why can't you understand
that you belong with me?
Me, the one who actually loves you...
Can't you see that I'm the one who understands you
Been here all along so why can't you see?
You belong with me
Because I love you like a bee loves nectar
From the beautiful flower that you are

Author's Note

Another poem with my favorite line from an artist's song. This time it's "You Belong With Me" By Taylor Swift. "Can't you see that I'm the one who understands you, been here all along so why can't you see? You belong with me".
This verse is from her song. I hope you guys enjoy! :)

Reviews

[Ellen Hammond]

You did a great job capturing the essence of the song. So often one can discover deeper feelings for their friend who doesn't seem to notice while he is in the spotlight.

One little nit: in the third line did you mean to put

'accept' or 'except"?

Other than that you did very well!

[Allie :)]

*accept= expect

The fact that you copied the last poem word-for-word from the song can be considered plagerism, and basically ruins this entire piece.
This seems mainly like it was way too rushed, and you didn't really take the time to complete your thought. As I've noticed from reading a lot of your works, you don't sit down and take the time to proofread and recheck your pieces.
Your ideas are good...
The longer a piece sits, the sweeter it gets...but if it doesn't, it probably just needs to be thrown away...

[Gone]

Beautiful!! I love it!!

[Kelly M.]

Beautiful and I can tell you like Taylor Swift. I like her, too. She has amazing songs! I can tell you were truly inspired. :)

[Katub]

I thought it was like the song, well done its really different but cool :)

[BlueberryKisses]

I love that song and I also love this poem :) you have done a great job writing this, you have included brilliant emotion! well done :)

[Sujash I. Purna]

lovely poetry!

[Coyote Poetry]

You have written a beautiful and positive poem of love. I like the description and the story in the poem. A powerful ending to a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Brad]

seeing taylor at the end of may! nice compliment to a great song

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This is amazing and wonderful, enjoyable read.