Beastly Beauty

Will Belle ever find true love despite her looks?

Everything is in its place,
the music,
the dress,
all except for my date...
because of my "beastly" appearance,

No one to dance with,
no one to talk to,
no one to make me feel beautiful inside and out
I'm all alone in this world...
without a soul  to protect me

Until you show up...

You came out of nowhere,
through the crowd
just to say hello to me
you take my hand, and we dance,
we dance as if no ones watching

You kiss me and I stare at you blankly,
I ask: "Why'd you do that?"
and he says: "I love you for whats on the inside, not the outside"

As we look into each others eyes
I remember what my mother always said to me:
"Inner beauty if far more beautiful than outer beauty."

I actually felt beautiful,
for the first time in my life...
and I hadn't been told a lie

I found someone to adore me
for me,
and for being just the way I am

Author's Note

I hope you guys like it, I changed who had the problem again.

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

Well planned poem. The scale is written clearly, it flows dramatically. Agree with your words too, "Inner beauty if far more beautiful than outer beauty". Now days, many people would only care on our appearences but not our personality. We need ot realiza that the way we look doesn't equals to that we're that kind of person. I love Beauty and the Beast, I learnt such a meaningful message here.

[dreaming dame]

It's beautiful! So sweet. And very true too. :)
I agree, though, the whole beaty thing. Very well written.

[alexlessah]

i love it! amazing job ;)

[quinfinn]

beautiful story, and elegantly written. what a charming poem about earning your own respect. you get the whole bag of cookies!

[Yina]

I love the way you do that!:) Awesome job with that:)

[Kat24]

hi,
this is really good. Kat24

[KAREN]

Great poem for people who look down on themselves, this should help them see that they are beautiful!

[Aurora Lynn]

Another fairytale poem! You always write these so well. Well done!

~Aurora

[Helpless]

aww the ending is so sweet

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very well written! Alot of people get mistreated for outer apperance when it should count more on whats on the inside! Excellent write

[unknown]

Yes beauty is more than skin deep. Lovely poem :)