Lost Email

Lost Email

A Poem by Tasha
"

being lost

"
We use to talk everyday,
whatever happened to that?
its like our love for each other
got lost in an email
its like I'm trapped in the spam filter
because we never spend time together
I hate being lost,
and the thought of losing you is terrifying
its like never entering your in-box
and I'm left waiting to be opened
waiting for our love to come back
because its missing...
in the world of emails

© 2011 Tasha


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I like this very nicely crafted poem very much Ta'shandra. Feelings well penned by your poetic pen so artistically. Lovely use of metaphor to describe a love which is ending - all the different phases of love gone through and excellently described in your poem. Nice silk smooth flow to the poem, which is so well expressed. Thank you for sharing Ta'shandra. Blessings always......

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Mesmirizing. Like so many relationships, you have captured the essence of it and weaved this idea into an expressive poem. Excellent work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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wonderful little gem. i feel like there is an emotional presence in this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like how can relate everything to everyday things

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting..Nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really a well written write. You captured the pain of longing to be with the one you love, but never seem to get in touch with him.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot it's really cool, modern but sad :) 100/100!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww :( its a sad poem but i really like it. It was a great read. :)
Good job!
100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very creative. I like this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this poem. I hate how relationships can go south so fast and are are left wondering if your email is even being read, by someone you want to get a message to so badly, especially if you are trying to say you are sorry.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the simplicity of this piece. And, of course, the symbolism. It is very nice and it is very true. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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