Am I Blind ?

Am I Blind ?

A Poem by Tasha

Am I blind to not see
what is in front of me?
is it because I choose
not to see?

Am I blind for not
realizing that
I'm not the
only one...

I'm not the only one
that  fell in your trap,
to be caught in
your web of lies...

Am I blind to see
that you hurt
so many
other people,
I'm just a new addition
to the list,
a list no one
would ever want
to be on

Was I that blind
to let my emotions
get the best of me

I thought things were fine
then it suddenly hit me
that they weren't...

I was just to blind to realize it...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I don't know what the problem is, but it seems like everyone's having relationship problems. This is for another friend. I hope I can give her some good advice.

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I guess we all have relationship problems now and then.
I am sorry you have a friend going through this.
But that is what relationships are all about.
No relationship is perfect, we all go through hard times.
That is what makes a relationship stronger.
Sometimes we need to sit and be alone and think things through,
Sometimes you need to talk to through. Which ever is the easiest.
Love takes two...commucation is the key.
It may hurt and bring tears but the thing is you pull through together.

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Amazing! Ta'Shandra, you are an amazing writer.
Keep up the beautiful and inspiring work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really good i could use this poem to give it to my friends .. hummn.. :) this is really good and i can relate to this i have been through it is just that when you think he is the one for you you dont see far more you ignore every imperfection on it and when you realized it he is not you found that he is not perfect love is blind great write !

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what it is-- is that being in love always blinds us!! thats everyone. we all go thruogh it and will continue too. That's just life..nice poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coming from a married guy, it doesn't change either. Couples have problems with or without the ring, with or without kids.

Great work, simple and to the point.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is really good. If he lied to her and hurt her, then she shouldn't be with him. No one should be hurt.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an easy poem to understand and sympathize with. Nice flow also; you did a good job with the way you broke the words up into lines.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. Everyone has relationship problems at least once in their lifetime, so this is easily relatable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh God, this is perfect. Apart from it's beauty, it's like it was written for me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Understood and conmended, excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I guess we all have relationship problems now and then.
I am sorry you have a friend going through this.
But that is what relationships are all about.
No relationship is perfect, we all go through hard times.
That is what makes a relationship stronger.
Sometimes we need to sit and be alone and think things through,
Sometimes you need to talk to through. Which ever is the easiest.
Love takes two...commucation is the key.
It may hurt and bring tears but the thing is you pull through together.

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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