Did I Ruin Everything

What did I do to you?
I thought this was a
Two-way street
I never did anything
I just spoke my mind,


Did I ruin everything
When I complemented you
Or when I said
You're different than most
What am I suppose to do cause baby its the truth
Forget about you
And the things you do
Did I ruin everything


When I said I have feelings for you
But its you, you're the one
To string me along
When you liked someone else
Leaving me to be lost
In the pact
In a race that goes on for miles
Did I ruin everything


With myself
Believing in you,
Did I ruin everything
When I listened to you

But its you that ruined everything

Author's Note

Old feelings I had. What did you think?

Reviews

[Helpless]

sometimes i feel like a i ruin everyone else's life by being in it.... not mine, but theres. so in a way i know how you feel. but a friend of mine made me realize that we really shouldn't blame ourselves for everything, cause not everything is our fault.

[hannahjchin]

really gritty and the emotion is so raw, i love it

[IceDragonOfPluto]

ah, the complications of love. It's like a wound that never heals. Though you know the truth, it never rests. Blaming the self is one of the many consequences when a love is full of strife. You captured that well.

[Raven Starhawk]

I think we all ask ourselves the questions you pose in this poem. Well penned.

[Keevan]

I love this, great poem! I know a lot of people who can relate. Wonderful write!

[Nicky Wilson]

This was really well written and I can definitely relate good job :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww. This hit me in the heart. So sad and very relatable. I love it! Great write! =D

[Muse]

My best writing comes from digging up all the old feeling of love and hate that gets burried deep. Nice write.

[Linear]

I think your words will resonate with many, they do with me.
Great poetry

[nonno noo]

This seems very real. I think after every failed relationship, there are those thoughts of "was it me?" that tend to incessantly linger. Awesome!

[Michael of Gilead]

no relationship is 50/50 but so many are far to one sided