Did I Ruin Everything

Did I Ruin Everything

A Poem by Tasha
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Did I?

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What did I do to you?
I thought this was a
Two-way street
I never did anything
I just spoke my mind,


Did I ruin everything
When I complemented you
Or when I said
You're different than most
What am I suppose to do cause baby its the truth
Forget about you
And the things you do
Did I ruin everything


When I said I have feelings for you
But its you, you're the one
To string me along
When you liked someone else
Leaving me to be lost
In the pact
In a race that goes on for miles
Did I ruin everything


With myself
Believing in you,
Did I ruin everything
When I listened to you

But its you that ruined everything

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
Old feelings I had. What did you think?

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sometimes i feel like a i ruin everyone else's life by being in it.... not mine, but theres. so in a way i know how you feel. but a friend of mine made me realize that we really shouldn't blame ourselves for everything, cause not everything is our fault.

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Great!!! I loved it especially the ending. :}

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The heart and mind in conflict.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is well done, I can feel your confusion and anger about a relationship. Keep it up, and if you have time check out some of my poems.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Feelings expressed so well here, really heartfelt and relatable indeed : )

Posted 12 Years Ago


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