Once Upon A Nightmare

What happened to once upon a time?

Once upon a time

I remember when 

Everything was perfect,

When we got along

And when our  loved showed

Once upon a nightmare

I remember when you said

I wasn't good enough,

It was like you stabbed 

Me in the heart

And all my blood, sweat

And tears flooded the floor

Once upon a time,

I remember when

You told me you loved me,

Once upon a nightmare

That love flew out 

The window...

I wasn't important to you

Like I use to be

You found someone else

You left me crying

And heartbroken...

Aching for you,

A sudden rage to find you

And hurt you!

But now during this time,

There's someone else...

Who isn't a b***h like you

And now its you wanting 

To relive the past...

But it's too late.....

Hahaha... Looks like a nightmare for you!!

Author's Note

The ending is different than I expected. I hope you like it anyway.

Reviews

[Chris]

Hi Ta'Sha,

Everything is soooooooo intense - no shades of gray... WHITEST white, BLACKEST black. LOVE is just a YESSS!! and being hurt is sooooo WRONG!!! and its beyond belief that anyone could GASP!!! DISS-you... if you hurt its ok? to want to hurt another or to just 'bring-it'... and the plans of revenge are just sooooooooooo satisfying.

But damn, you still hurt when you get home, and at night your mind still can't quite wrap itself around the why's and the feelings that flow inside... just before you find yourself asleep. Lifes a pure Biatch... sometimes... isn't it?

[~goh~]

ZOMGILIKETHISPOEM

Sorry, had to get my spaz out for the day.
Anyway, I really like the ending: funny and totally unexpected :3

[Just Cat]

Haha. The end made me laugh!
I love the style and theme of this.
Pure genius! :D

[TheElfPrincess]

Wow, this was good! It was quite funny and I didn't expect the ending! Well done, I loved it.