No Longer The Same

No Longer The Same

A Poem by Tasha
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7/18/11

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"What's gotten into you?"

You're no longer the 

Same girl you use to be,

You now hold your head up high

And you speak your mind,

Why are you no longer the same?

I like the old you

That did stuff to satisfy everyone else's needs

You did it without question, 

I don't like the new you,

Because you're no longer the same

And I can't control everything you do...

© 2011 Tasha


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 Tasha
Inspired by the book My Life As A Doormat in the perspective of the boyfriend who doesn't like the changes his girlfriend endures. Honest reviews.

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EMF
Good form, structure and well written, but it seemed to lack the 'umph' some of your other work does. That indefinable something that set's your work apart from the norm. If I could put my finger on what it was I would tell you, but you definatley have it

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Well done! This is very well written. However, I do have to point out that some of the lines are lacking that bit of power you want them to. To fix it, I suggest bringing more lines of angst, maybe? Angry or upset? I don't know. I'm not a poet. :D Great work!

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Max
This one is great and one of my favorites out of your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The words that you have chosen give the piece a very pointed feel. As if the writer is disgusted by what the other has become. The emotion comes acrost so strongly that the piece is gripping. Exceptionally written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another empowering write, no woman should allow her self to be a door mat, this was a breath of fresh air from the "I would do anything to have you" poetry you seem to see alot of!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful statement here. You pen well. Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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EMF
Good form, structure and well written, but it seemed to lack the 'umph' some of your other work does. That indefinable something that set's your work apart from the norm. If I could put my finger on what it was I would tell you, but you definatley have it

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

To many times people try to appease someone thinking it will get them to stay..and in the end they lose.. It's always best to be 100% you all the time.. Great write..xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


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'I can't control everything you do'... This poem shows the negative of the speaker....interesting concept.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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