I Dreamed  Myself To Sleep

I Dreamed Myself To Sleep

A Poem by Tasha
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Writing prompt on being unable to sleep

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I toss and turn all night
Because the thought of losing you
Is too much to handle
I grab the sweatshirt you gave me
From under my bed
And put it on
Just to have your scent on me
A scent I miss so much,
I hug myself because of the thought of you
I knew this was going to be the start
Of many sleepless nights,
I dream about all we had
And the love we shared
I curse myself for not trusting you
Its too late to apologize 
He's already out the door
I'm all alone and its a terrible storm
As I dream myself to sleep
I dream about him forgiving me
And me running into his arms
Being as happy as we use to be
But until then I sit in his sweatshirt 
And hope for the best
But until then I dream myself to sleep

© 2011 Tasha


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 Tasha
This literally took 5 minutes. I hope its good and you like it.

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Oh my gosh... i love this. =D So much emotions i can relate to! Well-written! And yeah, not getting sleep is horrible. Its frustrating like writer's block.. lol. But i hope you can get back to sleep peacefully again. Great write! I enjoyed it very much.

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You did very well with the poem. When someone get into our head late at night. Can make us think too much of them. A nice flow of desire to a very good ending. Thank you for your excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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this was nice have done a few of those tangible things of missing some one.

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If you can do this in five minutes you could take over the world in an hour. Damn good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


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fabulous...the title is a wow...it attracted me from the first read itself!
amazing poem ...i love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love it :) The last few lines seemed to stumble iover themselves a it, but the rest of the poem was filled with emotion, and your imagery was inpecable :) Great work, well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong and powerful. The emotions are so full. I can simple relate to it. An awesome piece.

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very nice poem. so emotional, I love it..... well written... ^^,

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Oh morpheous take me please to dreams where I used to dream.

I'm certain many will relate to your lovely poem. :0)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Oh my gosh... i love this. =D So much emotions i can relate to! Well-written! And yeah, not getting sleep is horrible. Its frustrating like writer's block.. lol. But i hope you can get back to sleep peacefully again. Great write! I enjoyed it very much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Gosh I know exactly how that feels, I am such a horrible sleeper. A great poem, with lovely description. I could see it happening. Well done.

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