Your Words

 

 

 

 

Your words

 

Ageless 

Faceless

Captivate me

Entrance me

Imprison my mind

Steal my heart

Hidden meanings

Not really there

Hearing thoughts

Never said

Notions of love

Undefined

Space and time 

Are you really there?

I often wonder

And yet still

I find myself

Addicted

Wanting

Seeking

Craving

Needing

Reading

More of 

 

Your words

Author's Note

Random thought...

Reviews

[Blue Sky]

random as these words spill to intirgue
the minds, and so wonderfully mastered


Are you really there?

I often wonder

And yet still

I find myself

Addicted

Wanting

Seeking

Needing

Reading more of



Your words

...excellent piece that just

undefined space and time

altogether, creating a wonderful poem!!
as always charmed by your touch!!

[Amanda]

a nice write...and sometimes i feel this way when i read other people's works. other words that can be used are mesmerizing and seductive..a lot of writes and stories do just that.

good job, my friend :)

A

[Windy]

Random spill?? This is really good. Not "wordy" yet every word says something. good job

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Yes! I agree this is purely random but on the other hand it's so deep and thoughtful...

"Addicted
Wanting
Seeking
Needing
Reading more of


Your words" This one really left me thinking!

Brilliant effort, Great write
:)

[Brianna Brie]

I imagined so many different scenarios into which this could fit. Great descriptions of "Your words". Lovely...

[Xenion Ra]

I like it, it's kind of a blank slate where anyone can project themselves into it. Who wouldn't want to be this dynamic! Nice write! minimal and enjoyable!

[Mr. Lopez]

OH MY!!! Has some one gotten your attention enough to spir such creation ? Or is this truly a rant ? Either way, you have a "California Cool" poem here. Powerful and to the point. I loved it !!

[Justin Tobey]

This is exactly how I feel when I talk to my Jido (grandpa)! Only occasionally, we come across those special people who can completely entrance us, without even trying. Good job! : )

[*Kantola*]

This was a beautiful poem, even though it was random :P I have random spills all the time, dont worry!
I absolutely adored the way that you worded this poem. At first it's defining "your words", then it's talking about how you feel about "your words." Wonderful transition from both. I liked what you did with this :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Brilliant... it's great how certain writers can appeal to something deep inside that we can't get enough of there work... you said it best.