Poetry (Cinquain)

Poetry (Cinquain)

A Poem by Dani California
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Didactic Cinquain

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Poetry

Passionate Fashioned

Soulful Ink Spills

Musing Crafts Creative Intent

Verse

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Dani California


Author's Note

Dani California
My first attempt at a Didactic Cinquain; rules are as follows:

11 WORDS
LINE 1. One-word title, the subject of the poem;
LINE 2. 2 adjectives describing that title;
LINE 3. 3 word phrase that gives more information about the subject;
LINE 4. 4 words describing feelings related to that subject;
LINE 5. A single word synonym or other reference for the subject from line one.


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I'm impressed...because I'm someone who is typically not a "form" writer...mostly because I'm pretty terrible at it...LOL You've done a very good job with this, I think...as you've managed to make it beautiful and passionate, which I find is often hard to do when you're forced to follow strict form. Nicely done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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As always you do exceptional work. I'm not familiar with a didactic cinquain, so I had to check it out. I tend to shut down when confronted with restrictions. So I doubt if I will attempt this. But you did a great job. The words you chose fit perfectly.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Dani
Each word seems to edify the next through your arrangement in this expression.

Great work always Dani :-)! ~ Judi xoxo


Posted 15 Years Ago


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Another creation mastered with brilliance

superbly done, and quite a knack with the rules and all
which I wouldn't even have a smidgen of.
So excellently captured to make a fantastic creation!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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nicely done, girlfriend....alas, a new form for me to try...lol.

great job, Dani.

A xox

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I really love this Dani. A perfect Didactic Cinquain. It all fits together very well. Great write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are becoming quite a talented and creative writer. My hats off to you, dear lady. Great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfect cinquain Dani! I love it!

Soulful ink spills... great line :-)

Excellent description of poetry, photo is stunning. Groovy dear one :-)
xxx



Posted 15 Years Ago


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I enjoyed this, Dani. Very interesting format, well put across:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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great work my friend.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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It certainly looks like you've nailed this one! These short forms are difficult and take much more thought than longer poems. Sharon

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on September 17, 2008
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