Hey Sister Sin

Hey Sister Sin

A Poem by Dannyisawriter

Hey Sister Sin
I see you standing there
And pretty soon you'll have me pulling out my hair 
The mental state I'm in 
Well it's paper thin
So hey Sister Sin 
I see that grin 
Why can I never say no?
God only knows
You'll keep me up all night long
This is so wrong

Fall from grace
Right on my face
Lying in mud
Oh God what have I done

Sister Sin 
You keep me going all night 
But soon we'll have to fight 
This has gone on too long
This is just so wrong
I think it's time to lock you in your cell 
Send you back to hell
Where you belong 
Mark my words, because it won't be long

Climb to grace
Get off my face
Wipe the mud
Because we're done

© 2014 Dannyisawriter


Author's Note

Dannyisawriter
"Sister Sin" isn't supposed to be an actual person in this. I was trying to personify every guys struggle with lust and stuff like that. (I'm not to sure if it worked tbh)

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It worked perfectly! This is a very creative way to personify lust! Good job, keep up the good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


very nice. I didn't find any mistakes. It was also touching. Keep up the good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Really well written. I think it probably worked. Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on December 5, 2014
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Any way to use my imagination is my favorite pass time, and writing is my favorite way to express myself. I am unashamed to claim to be a Christian. And I hope that my writing will somehow be a positi.. more..

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