"All My Love Will Remain"

In my darkest hour 

God, I can hear you say:

"The stars may collide

The sun may fall from the sky

The ground may shake

And the mountains break

But no matter the pain 

I will remain

I know you feel betrayed

But child don't be dismayed

I can see your pain

But all my love will remain

The moon may fall 

You may think you've lost it all

Your world may end 

But I'll never bend 

No matter the pain 

I will remain 

Friends and family may turn their back

But my love you will never lack 

Because child I see all your pain 

And all my love will remain!" 

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

You have variety in your work, which I absolutely respect. I loved the rhyming in this poem, and the overall style of it. Three thumbs up and an imaginary cupcake for a job well done!

[Dannyisawriter]

Thank you very much and I love cupcakes (as long as they aren't chocolate LOL)

[Riley Justine]

Gorgeous piece :) A little different from your usual writing but I really liked this!

[Dannyisawriter]

Awe thanks :)

[Skai Rain]

Pretty and powerful. Loved every word!

[TheLostMind]

A really good write... loved it... :)

[NoelHC]

Well rhymed, and I always enjoy repetition, this one worked well for me.

[MomzillaNC]

Powerful.

NOTES: I think you meant, "The moon [may] fall"

[Dannyisawriter]

Oops! I'll fix that LOL

[MomzillaNC]

No worries. :D

[Leslie Philibert]

Well put together, well written

[iveltac]

There were no mistakes and i like how it rhymns. I also like your picture. My favorite part was the last 4 sentences. you were talking through your words again:p. Keep up the good work.

[Falling Leaf.]

Interesting write, I can feel your admiration and emotion through your words, well done! x

[Dannyisawriter]

Thanks a bunch :)