Forever

A tasteful kiss
forever mine
I am wrapped
within the depth of
his caged soul

Drops of passion
drip from my
mortal lips
ecstasy enticing
to the touch as we
entwine as one

Sweet nectar
over flowing within
the blood red moon
dew drops of sinful play
he forever

Beckons my heart away

Reviews

[realmwriter]

Very well written piece. Love the metaphors used here. Perfectly conveys tyhe love these two people share!

[WritersSoul]

Beautiful and the actual play just screens through your head as you read :)

[Enigma]

A beautiful poem using vivid imagery and metaphors to paint a picture of a passionate love shared by two people. Well penned.

[rwar ish me]

this is very nice.
I really like this.
Very tasteful
~Amai

[joshua deathdealer]

Awesome!! Favorited..well done...xx

[Thea]

Wow...That was amazing...Love the imagery here... :)))

[EMF]

A stunning write. Beautiful and beguiling.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"Sweet nectar
over flowing within
the blood red moon
dew drops of sinful play
he forever"

Powerful imagery and the dark sensation of love is provocative. I love it!

[Dove]

Very good word choice, i really like this piece. good job!

[Inyourshadow]

Love the final four lines and the part that speaks of being wrapped in the depth of his caged soul, a beautiful declaration to love, you penned this so lovingly and so dark showing that love is deeper than chocolates and roses. keep em' coming